1. Everett Public Schools Assessment of Student Learning
  2. Teacher’s Guide
  3. Coached Reading Assessment
  4. Grade 8
  5. Grading Period 2
      1. Teacher Directions
      2. Preparation:
      3. Directions for Administration
      4. Before Reading:
      5. During Reading:
      6. Collect all assessment materials.
      7. After Reading:
      8. Scoring Guide
      9. Scoring Guide
      10. 9. Short Answer Item – 2 points
      11. Strand: Thinking Critically Learning Target: LT09 – Evaluate Reasoning
      12. Scoring Guide
      13. 10. Extended Response Item – 4 points Strand: Analysis
      14. Learning Target: LA07 – Cause and Effect
      15. Scoring Guide
      16. Learning Target: LA06 – Compare/Contrast

    Everett Public Schools
    Assessment of Student Learning

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    Teacher’s Guide

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    Coached Reading Assessment

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    Grade 8

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    Grading Period 2
    “Thank You M’am”
    “Each Life Affects Another’s”

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    Coached Reading Assessment
    Teacher Directions
    Purpose:
    The purpose of the coached assessment is to provide students with modeled and scaffolded instruction
    in test-taking and skills in answering questions addressing the assessed targets.
    Time:
    Approximately 2-3 class periods.
    Preparation:
    ƒ
    Make copies or transparencies of:
    o reading passage(s),
    o assessment questions, and
    o scoring guide.
    ƒ
    Be sure you have reading passage(s) and a student packet for each student. You may make additional copies,
    if needed.
    ƒ
    Students will need to use a pencil
    during the assessment.
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    Students will need to use a colored pen or pencil
    for scoring their responses.
    Directions for Administration
    Before Reading:
    1. Preview reading passage and assessment questions
    .
    2. Pass out the reading passage and the student packets.
    NOTE:
    If you plan to use this assessment for a score in
    your grade book, skip to Step 6. You can still teach about how to best approach the different texts and
    questions after the students have independently completed the assessment.
    3. Give the students four minutes to preview
    the reading passage and the assessment questions.
    4. After four minutes
    , ask students to orally share observations about the reading passage and the questions.
    What did they notice? (Type of genre, captions, vocabulary, key words in questions, etc.) Can any
    predictions be made about the reading passage?
    During Reading:
    5. Key words and phrases
    . Ask students to silently read question number one and underline key words or
    phrases that help them understand the question. Afterwards, elicit key words and phrases from students while
    you highlight them on an overhead. Briefly do this for each question.
    6. Read and then answer the questions
    . Tell students to silently read the passage and answer the questions. Tell
    students they may reread any part of the passage to find evidence to support their answers. After doing so,
    suggest that they write the page number in the margin next to the assessment question to indicate where they
    found the answer.
    7. When all have finished,
    tell students that they will be scoring their own papers tomorrow so that they can see
    how they did.
    Collect all assessment materials
    .

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    After Reading:
    8. Return reading passage and student packets to students
    . Tell students that they will be scoring their own
    papers and will need a colored pen.
    9. Find evidence for correct answers.
    For Multiple Choice Items:
    Go through each question together. Have students share how they figured out
    each answer in the multiple choice section. Refer back to the pages in the passage to point out the location of
    evidence for selecting the response. Award 1 or 0 points for each correct answer. Help students see the value
    of basing their answers on evidence from the text.
    For Short Answer and Extended Response Items:
    Put up the transparency with the scoring guide. Discuss
    what parts of the passage provide the evidence required. Students should underline the phrases in their
    responses that earn points. Students should award themselves a score of 2, 1, or 0 points for short answer
    items and 4, 3, 2, 1, or 0 for extended response items.
    10. Analysis of scores
    : Put up a transparency of the Student Score Sheet. Show that each question has been
    coded with the learning target that it assesses. Using the Student Score Sheet
    , ask students to fill in the grid
    with the number of points they earned for each item and add up the scores for each column or strand
    (comprehension, analysis, or critical thinking).
    11. Discuss scoring: Direct students to use their completed score sheet to reflect on their performance for each
    strand (see #9) and for each of the three types of items (multiple choice, short answer, extended response).
    Discuss what could be done differently to improve scores. If student performed well on the assessment, have
    them include what they did well that contributed to their answers.
    12. Collect all assessment materials
    .
    13. Save assessment materials
    . Do not release student packets to students.

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    Secondary Reading Strands and Targets
    Literary Texts
    Literary Comprehension: The student comprehends important ideas and details in literary texts.
    LC01 The student demonstrates understanding of major ideas (theme or message) and supportive details of
    literary texts.
    LC02 The student summarizes literary texts (with evidence from reading).
    LC03 The student makes inferences or predictions about literary texts (based on the reading).
    LC04 The student interpret general and specialized vocabulary critical to the meaning of the text.
    Literary Analysis: The student analyzes, interprets, and synthesizes ideas in literary texts.
    LA05 The student applies understanding of literary elements (genres, story elements such as plot, character,
    setting, stylistic devices) and graphic elements/illustrations.
    LA06 The student compares/contrasts elements of the text or makes connections within the text.
    LA07 The student compares/contrasts (elements of texts) or makes connections or synthesizes among or
    between texts.
    Literary Critical Thinking: The student thinks critically about literary texts.
    LT08 The student analyzes author's purpose and evaluates effectiveness for different audiences.
    LT09 The student evaluates reasoning and ideas/themes related to the text.
    LT10 The student extends information beyond the text (apply information, give a response to reading, express
    insight gained from the reading).
    Informational Texts
    Informational Comprehension: The student comprehends important ideas and details in informational
    texts.
    IC11
    The student demonstrates understanding of major ideas and supportive details of informational texts.
    IC12
    The student summarizes informational (with evidence from the reading) and task-oriented texts.
    IC13
    The student makes inferences or predictions (based on the reading) about informational/task-oriented
    texts.
    IC14
    The student interprets general and specialized vocabulary critical to the meaning of the text.
    Informational Analysis: The student analyzes, interprets, and synthesizes ideas in informational texts.
    IA15 The student applies understanding of info/task elements, graphic elements and illustrations. Applies
    understanding of text features (titles, headings, and other information divisions, table of contents, indexes,
    glossaries, prefaces, appendices, captions) and graphic features.
    IA16 The student compares/contrasts elements of the text or makes connections within the text.
    IA17 The student compares/contrasts or makes connections or synthesizes among or between texts.
    Informational Thinking Critically: The student thinks critically about informational texts.
    IT18
    The student analyzes author's purpose (including distinguishing between fact and opinion) and evaluates
    effectiveness for different audiences.
    IT19
    The student evaluates reasoning and ideas/themes related to the text.
    IT20
    The student extends information beyond the text.

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    Coached Reading Assessment
    Scoring Guide
    Grade 8 – Grading Period 2
    Please refer to attached
    Reading Strands and Targets
    document on preceding page.
    Multiple Choice Items – 1 point each
    Student
    MC
    Answers
    Strand and Target
    Evidence to support MC answers
    1.
    C
    LT08 Author’s Purpose
    Kindness= not turning Roger into the police, taking him home, feeding him,
    sharing stories from her past, and giving him money
    Making a difference= at the end of the story the boy is unable to express his
    gratitude (see line 45) because he is so overwhelmed by Mrs. Jones’ kindness
    and the reader is left to hope that his future behavior will be more positive.
    2.
    A
    LT10
    Extend Beyond Text
    Mrs. Jones doesn’t turn the boy over to the police, she feeds him, she gives
    him money for the shoes
    3.
    D
    LT09
    Evaluate Reasoning
    Paragraph 37, last two sentences
    4.
    D
    LA06
    Compare/Contrast
    Mrs. Jones: Starting with line 2 and beyond she shows she is not scared of the
    boy attempting to steel her purse
    Roger: Line 11 and 14 show he is frightened
    5.
    A
    LA07
    Cause and Effect
    Mrs. Jones kicks Roger in the rear, picks him up by his shirt shaking him until
    his teeth rattle, she drags him down the street lecturing Roger the whole time.
    6.
    D
    LT08 Author’s Purpose
    Italics are often used to stress the ideas and thinking of certain characters
    7.
    A
    LT09
    Evaluate Reasoning
    A is most important conclusion.
    8.
    D
    LA06
    Compare/Contrast
    In paragraph 36, Mrs. Jones says, “I have done things, too, which I would not
    tell you, son – neither tell God, if He didn’t already know…”
    9.
    SA
    LT09
    Evaluate Reasoning
    See scoring guide on following pages
    10. ER
    LA07
    Cause and Effect
    See scoring guide on following pages
    11. D
    LT10
    Extend Beyond Text
    See first and last stanzas
    12. B
    LA07
    Cause and Effect
    See first line of the 4
    th
    stanza
    13. SA
    LA06
    Compare/Contrast
    See scoring guide on following pages
    Note:
    SA
    and
    ER
    stand for Short Answer and Extended Response items. The short answer and extended response scoring
    guide is found on the following pages.

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    Coached Reading Assessment
    Scoring Guide
    Grade 8 – Grading Period 2
    9. Short Answer Item – 2 points
    Strand: Thinking Critically
    Learning Target: LT09 – Evaluate Reasoning
    Was Mrs. Jones’ treatment of Roger a good idea? Include
    two
    details from the story to support your
    answer.
    2
    A
    2-point response
    states or implies whether or not Mrs. Jones’ treatment of Roger seems
    fair, and provides
    two
    text-based details for support.
    1
    A
    1-point response
    states or implies whether or not Mrs. Jones’ treatment of Roger seems
    fair, and provides
    one
    text-based detail for support.
    Text-based details may include, but are not limited to:
    No
    Mrs. Jones is too rough or physical with roger
    Mrs. Jones kicks Roger in the blue-jean sitter.
    Mrs. Jones picks Roger up by his shirt front in a firm manner.
    Mrs. Jones shakes Roger until his teeth rattle.
    Mrs. Jones tells Roger he is dirty and she is going to wash him.
    Mrs. Jones drags Roger to her house.
    Mrs. Jones puts Roger in a half nelson.
    Yes
    Mrs. Jones tries to teach Roger important lessons and show him kindness and trust
    Mrs. Jones kicks him in the blue-jean sitter because he stole her purse.
    Mrs. Jones doesn’t turn him into the police.
    Mrs. Jones feeds him and lets Roger wash up.
    Mrs. Jones tells Roger she has also done bad things, but learned from her mistakes.
    Mrs. Jones gives Roger $10 and tells him to buy himself the blue suede shoes.
    Mrs. Jones leaves Roger with the purse and trusts he will not run a way with it.
    Yes and No
    Student will chose one from the “yes” and one from the “no.”

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    Coached Reading Assessment
    Scoring Guide
    Grade 8 – Grading Period 2
    10.
    Extended Response Item – 4 points
    Strand: Analysis
    Learning Target: LA07 – Cause and Effect
    What problem does Mrs. Jones face in the story? What are
    three
    events that happened as a result of
    the problem? Include information from the story in your answer.
    4
    A
    4-point response
    states an appropriate problem Mrs. Jones faces in the story and
    provides
    three
    text-based events that happen as a result of the problem.
    3
    A
    3-point response
    states an appropriate problem Mrs. Jones faces in the story and
    provides
    two
    text-based events that happen as a result of the problem
    OR
    Provides
    three
    text-based events that would happen as a result of an appropriate (but
    unstated) problem.
    2
    A
    2-point response
    states an appropriate problem Mrs. Jones faces in the story and
    provides
    one
    text-based event that happen as a result of the problem
    OR
    Provides
    two
    text-based events that would happen as a result of an appropriate (but
    unstated) problem.
    1
    A
    1-point response
    states an appropriate problem Mrs. Jones faces in the story
    OR
    Provides
    one
    text-based event that would happen as a result of an appropriate (but
    unstated) problem.
    Text-based details may include, but are not limited to:
    Mrs. Jones’ problem is a boy attempts to snatch her purse
    OR
    Mrs. Jones’ problem is to decide what to do with someone who tried to steal her purse
    She kicked him in the sitter and shook him.
    She made him pick up her pocketbook.
    She asked him if he was ashamed of himself.
    She told him when she got through with him he would remember her.
    She held him in a half nelson and dragged him down the street and into her house.
    She told him to wash his face, comb his hair.
    She let him be near her purse as if she trusted him.
    She fixed him food to eat when she found out he hadn’t had dinner.
    She spoke while he ate and told him about herself.
    She asked him why he did it and found out he wanted blue suede shoes.
    She gave him $10 for the shoes.
    She told him to behave himself and not to steal again from her or anybody.
    She sent him back out into the street.

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    Coached Reading Assessment
    Scoring Guide
    Grade 8 – Grading Period 2
    13
    .
    Short Answer Item – 2 points
    Strand: Analysis
    Learning Target: LA06 – Compare/Contrast
    The author of the poem states, “We may not always realize that everything we do affects not only
    our life but touches others, too.” Provide
    two
    examples from the story “Thank You M’am” that
    demonstrates this idea.
    2
    A
    2-point response
    provides
    two
    text-based examples from “Thank You M’am” that
    demonstrates the idea found in the poem.
    1
    A
    1-point response
    provides
    one
    text-based examples from “Thank You M’am” that
    demonstrates the idea found in the poem.
    Text-based details may include, but are not limited to the following:
    When Roger steals the purse from Mrs. Jones, he affected her life by involving her in a crime
    and making her choose how to best respond to the situation.
    When Mrs. Jones chooses to treat Roger with kindness and understanding this gives Roger a
    second chance for his future rather than ending up in jail.
    The trust that Mrs. Jones shows Roger by leaving the wallet in full view affects Roger by
    building up his own self worth showing he is a trustworthy person that can make good
    choices.
    Mrs. Jones’ small act of kindness by taking Roger in and teaching him a lesson about stealing
    appears to have affected him in a positive way as is evident when the boy is unable to
    verbalize his appreciation to Mrs. Jones at the end of the story.

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    Coached Reading Assessment
    Strand Score Scale
    Comprehension Strand
    4
    3
    2
    1
    0 Points Possible
    -
    -
    -
    -
    Analysis/Interpret Strand
    4
    3
    2
    1
    10 Points Possible
    9-10
    8
    6-7
    0-5
    Critical Thinking Strand
    4
    3
    2
    1
    8 Points Possible
    8
    6-7
    5
    0-4

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