It is a students’ thoughts about a concrete detail.
Can anybody think of other ways commentary will help writing? Commentary (making comments) is really an opinion about a fact (concrete detail).
So the following slides provide the students with opportunity to look at paragraphs that only contain concrete details and allow the students to express their personal opinions about the details.
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