Prompt: Life can be full of surprises that have an effect on our lives.
Commentary (8th-HS) connects elaboration, reason(s), and thesis/position.
Organization - 3
Level 3: ProficientA.
Introduction presents thesis/position.
Transitions: The transitions maintain connections between paragraphs and
the paper as a whole.
Baseline Annotation 811HB.docx Date Revised: 9.16.2011 2
Style - 3Level 3: ProficientA. Sentences create an appropriate cadence for a designatedaudience/purpose/form through a variety of beginnings,structure...
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