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Baseline Annotation 811SE.pdf
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Owner: Geveshausen, Olivia (User-6386, 15414:EVERETT)DS
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Thursday, November 18, 2021 01:12:06 PM PST
Modified By: Diaz, Ailienette (User-392, 08810:EVERETT)DS
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  • Grade 8 Baseline Annotation – Expository Writing - #811SE
Prompt: Life can be full of surprises that have an effect on our lives.
  • Reasons: The reasons are missing; there are no clear reasons/main points about why the
trip was a surprise, or how it affected the student’s life; it is simply a storyabout a trip and how they traveled.
  • Transitions: Transitions are omitted between paragraphs, and within the
paragraphs there were repetitive transitions “then, but, plus” used.
  • Level 1: Below Basic
Sentences a cadence that is awkward for audience/purpose/form withminimal variety of beginnings, structures and lengths.
  • *Bold text in descriptions indicates language from the rubric.
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