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Baseline Annotation 911JT.pdf
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  • Grade 9 Baseline Annotation – Expository Writing - #911JT
Prompt: Think about classes you have taken and identify one class that is memorable.
  • Reasons: The reasons are so general they can be considered missing “you were the best
teacher […], “one of the most unforgettable”).
  • There is a lack of
connection/support between main points of each paragraph and the thesisbeyond the very basic connection of being events or memories of the classitself.
  • B.
  • Middle reasons/elaboration are randomly or illogically ordered;
may lack completenessC.
  • Transitions are incorrectly used, omitted, or repetitive in use
(between/within-paragraphs).D. Conclusion is missing or restates topic/the...
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