| - Grade 10 Baseline Annotation – Expository Writing - #1011KS
Prompt: In two years, you will graduate from high school.Focus: Focus gets lost and wanders throughout paper, jumping from one topic to thenext: car, racing, cooking, nickname, and being nice.known as a guy with a good sense of humor”).- *Bold text in descriptions indicates language from the rubric.
- The essay
jumps from one idea to the next with no connection or flow (e.g.,“the best way I will be known is for being the best Javilin thrower inthe J.H.S.- Track team. B. Word Choice shows redundancy, is incorrect/has omissions, or confuses and
weakens the writing. |
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