- Grade 7 Baseline Annotation – Expository Writing - #711AS
Prompt: Think of a person who made a difference in your life.
- Elaboration: Elaboration is connected but it does not adequately support the reasons
listed.
- Attempts one or more of the
conclusion strategies.
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Introduction: The introduction is limited, primarily a restatement of topic and
presentation of thesis in a limited context.
- It could be a friend, family member, neighbor, coach, teacher – anyone
who has changed your life.
- ***************
Sentences: The cadence is trouble for audience due to a limited variety of
beginnings, structures and lengths.
Baseline Annotation 711AS.pdf 
