- Grade 9 Baseline Annotation – Expository Writing - #911JT
Prompt: Think about classes you have taken and identify one class that is memorable.
- Reasons: The reasons are so general they can be considered missing “you were the best
teacher […], “one of the most unforgettable”).
- There is a lack of
connection/support between main points of each paragraph and the thesis
beyond the very basic connection of being events or memories of the class
itself.
- B.
- Middle reasons/elaboration are randomly or illogically ordered;
may lack completeness
C.
- Transitions are incorrectly used, omitted, or repetitive in use
(between/within-paragraphs).
D. Conclusion is missing or restates topic/the...
Baseline Annotation 911JT.pdf 
