- Grade 10 Baseline Annotation – Expository Writing - #1011KS
Prompt: In two years, you will graduate from high school.
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Focus: Focus gets lost and wanders throughout paper, jumping from one topic to the
next: car, racing, cooking, nickname, and being nice.
- I want to be
known as a guy with a good sense of humor”).
- *Bold text in descriptions indicates language from the rubric.
- The essay
jumps from one idea to the next with no connection or flow (e.g.,
“the best way I will be known is for being the best Javilin thrower in
the J.H.S.
- Track team. B. Word Choice shows redundancy, is incorrect/has omissions, or confuses and
weakens the writing.
Baseline Annotation 1011KS.pdf 
